How to get 60%+ email opens by passing your prospect's mental spam filter
Plus: Critiquing a NURTURE email for the first time!
Hello Friends š
Hope everybody is having a wonderful weekend.
This week Iām sharing an e-mail critique that was sent over by Cynthia from Sama. Switching it up a little bit as this is a nurture email in a nurture sequence.
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Now for this weeks topic: Getting past prospectās mental spam filters
Last week I missed an email from a prospect because the subject line was "Quick Question".
I don't even remember seeing the original email. Luckily they followed up and I apologized.
My brain doesn't even consciously register that subject line anymore. It's an automatic delete.
That's why it's so important that your subject line in a cold email is a pattern disruptor and getās past your prospectās mental spam filter.
So how do you actually do that?
Lavender just released some really interesting data on subject lines after analyzing 100 Million emails. Hereās some of the finds:
1. Emails that include numbers in the subject line get 46% fewer opens
This generally means that you should stay away from using things like percentages in your subject lines (i.e. 25% increase in pipeline)
It sounds like a marketing email.
2. Emails with 2 word subject lines get 65% more opens than ones with 5+ words
If you look through your inbox you will probably realize that most emails have 5-7 words in the subject line. In order to stick out keep it short and sweet
3. Emails with title case subject lines get 43% more opens than those with lower-case or mix
I was surprised by this one. Iāve been using all lower case to stick out for the last while. That being said there is an important lesson here:
If too many people start doing one thing, it getās old and becomes a pattern.
It seems like now lowercase subject lines are hinting that itās a sales email.
Thatās why itās important you always adapt and continue to A/B test
4. Emails with punctuation in subject lines get 36% fewer opens
Subject lines like āTom - worried about downtime?ā scream sales email.
Even putting a prospects name in the subject line has become so common that it is no longer a pattern interrupt.
How to build great subject lines:
Remember, the purpose of a subject line is to sound internal. It needs to sound like a colleague of theirs is sending them that email in order to pass the mental spam filter test
1. Use their colleagues / direct reports names
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